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Words III

What use are these
Meagre words?
How may they truly capture
That tender, kind caring that,
Was his heart and soul?

How may humble letters build an image of such a life?

And yet,
In the end,
These foolish trembling words,
Are all that do remain.

There's a new star in the sky tonight...
©2003-2009 ~icklefluffywolfy
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Submitted: October 10, 2003
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A requiem of sorts.... for someone close who died tonight.... :sadangel:
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:sniff: It's so beautiful. The emotion is so heart warming. :nod: I love the overall meaning of this. I'm here for ya wolfy. :hug: and more :hug:s

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Death makes angels of us all
& gives us wings
where we had shoulders
smooth as raven's
claws
-Jim Morrison
"There's a new star in the sky tonight..."

Awesome work here. Love this piece, nice and short and to the point. Good work :D

Keep it up, and take care.

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Metaphor for a missing moment..
Pull me in to your perfect cirlce

~APC

*looks out the window up into the night sky* :aww: words are meaningful... yes, but they can not express the strongest of emotions--- only actions may. which purdy much blows monkeys lol pardon my portuguese.

i'm sure you feel it much more and stronger than the words you've written here. i know i do when i write stuff... idk how ta explain lol ok now i'm just being dumb and confusin again. arg ga! why am i so dumb?!

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take it as it comes
Awww.... :hug:


:petting:

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Ah, pillow gun. Where danger and comfort meet. Two hundred thread count, meet two hundred dead count. :ohnoes:

Hogwarts Live!
This is a very strong emotional poem, its well done, and I'm sorry, *hugs* Very beautifully written
This is a very strong emotional poem, its well done, and I'm sorry, *hugs* Very beautifully written
it is full of emotion....even though there are few words...its what you cant seem to say that shines through. it is a very good piece dear wolfy. :hug: :petting:

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The human race never ceases to irritate me. :threaten:
Aw wolfy first off :Hug: Secodnly, Great poem my dear friend.

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