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Plumeria

A sweet scent lingers upon a Summer\'s breeze,
Drifting softly through the trees.
As I gaze out across the endless seas,
Around my heart, entwine the leaves.

This wondrous song carries across the rift,
As upon my chest, lies Arwen\'s gift.
By this pure light and by silver, my heart beats swift,
As up to the sparkling stars it does me lift.

Words upon tracing paper, so deeply felt,
With such tender power, hunger and wonder are dealt.
Such things as are likely to make to me melt,
For this is truly, how love is spelt.
©2003-2009 ~icklefluffywolfy
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Submitted: June 3, 2003
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The continues rhyme scheme... (AAAA, BBBB, CCCC) is a little experiment of mine, I hope you all think it works!

Heh, I guess the meaning of this wont be so abstract to those who know about such things! Giggle
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aw... mr. fluffinessessess... i likes it!!! the imagery is wicked good!!! Clap Hug awesome job :D (Big Grin) not a biggie surprise though... we R talkin bouts the ONE and ONLY very very cute and fluffy and PRETTIFUL fluffy wolfy there is!!! lol

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take it as it comes
I like the first stanza best I think Nod this is a prettiful poem! Hug


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If I could put them in a jar
I know they wouldn't scar
I'd do it if I could
I hope you know I would
Yeah its Great. and the ryhme scheme is cool, it works really well here Clap
Good job Kiss

Goodbye...

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It figures
awesome...my god your a great poet... the words reach down and grab you... wonderful, i truly respect you and your writing...
Julie~
I feel like there should be flowers everywhere!!! So beautiful.....
wonderful as always!

The sceme is nice- you have such a good natural flow that i hardly noticed it.

Heart as always!

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"You are a treasure I don't want to lose."
you rhyme so naturally .... beautifully

i can smell the plumeria ... i can see the trees and feel the breeze

and there you are ... *smiles*

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Floating Wow this is wonderful wolfy! I really like this new rhyme schme it's very constant and flows perfectly. Great Work!Clap


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creative rhyme scheme...
i like it...the wolf ish still kyoot and wondrful...
i feel like his rite now...

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