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A Moment Ago

A moment ago, the whole world seemed like darkness,
A deep, all consuming, eternal black abyss.
A cold, ebon void, a deep gulf of nothingness.
All of it frozen, bleak, numb and meaningless.
Love was a wounding torturer, vicious,
And Fate a devious, mocking mistress.
Hope a cruel, cold-hearted temptress.
And Time was demon to stretch out my distress.

And then you came, with a few soft spoken words,
You took this miserable, melancholic scene,
And rotated by barely a few degrees.
And your deep words to bring into view,
A magical candle, shining bright and true.
It did shine its warm light and cut through the dark,
Going deep inside me, and melting this heart.

And so I stood in wonder, at the new flame of hope you had given.
I was left to stand, enraptured, gazing at your candle.
Wondrously enchnted, how I was left to marvel,
At how different things can seem,
When viewed from just a slightly different angle.
©2003-2010 ~icklefluffywolfy
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Author's Comments

This is something of a little poetic folly of mine really...

Anyways I just wanted to write something as a little tribute to all my friends. For all the kindness and love they have given and, especially, for the times that they have been there in my times of darkness and given me a light to help me through. I could never find the proper words to justify what you all mean to me. I hope this poem can go some way to it though. You all know who you are, and I want you to know how much I love all of you. I will always be there for you too! My wolfpack, it is no hyperbole for me to say, you are the meaning for my existence! *snugglepounces you all!!*

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:iconwinternity:
And so I stood in wonder, at the new flame of hope you had given.
I was left to stand, enraptured, gazing at your candle.
Wondrously enchnted, how I was left to marvel,
At how different things can seem,
When viewed from just a slightly different angle.

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wow.. i love this..!

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I see love in Your coffee.
:iconicklefluffywolfy:
:aww: Thanks so much for the kindness of your words! :hug:

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i'm sure all of your friends are greatful to have a great writer/poet as yourself. good stuff. sad to happiness ;) (Wink) keep smilling aight
:iconlunarwolf:
This part:

At how different things can seem,
When viewed from just a slightly different angle.

Says how ive been experiencing stuff lately.

Great poem.
:iconsweetflower:
Aww sssooooo beautifullllzzz!!!! Clap good job!!! :) (Smile)

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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn...is to love and be loved in return."
:iconspllogics:
great work wonderfully writen. nice screen shot to.

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:icons1o2p3h4y:
I somewhat like it. I don't like how it rhymes, or TRIES to rhyme. You should rethink the first stanza at the most. Also, for whatever ryhme scheme there is (did you plan it to rhyme?), there isn't very much flow. The ryme sequence doesn't seem to have a pattern. Instead of a b a b c d c d e f e f it's like a a a a b c b c e f f e f f c b a. Yanno?

Other than that, it looks like you have some admirers! :) (Smile)

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"if i could be anything in the world that flew,
i would be a bat and come swooping after you."
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:iconnuozek:
Daily top fav ;) (Wink) u go wolf man!
:iconpixi33:
I love it darlin. But, then again you always write so well. I woke up this morning and saw your poem on the opening page of DA I'm so happy =) (Smile) Great job this one is truely amazing =) (Smile)
:iconviggo-is-my-muse:
just perfect

+favlove

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