A Moment Ago
A moment ago, the whole world seemed like darkness,
A deep, all consuming, eternal black abyss.
A cold, ebon void, a deep gulf of nothingness.
All of it frozen, bleak, numb and meaningless.
Love was a wounding torturer, vicious,
And Fate a devious, mocking mistress.
Hope a cruel, cold-hearted temptress.
And Time was demon to stretch out my distress.
And then you came, with a few soft spoken words,
You took this miserable, melancholic scene,
And rotated by barely a few degrees.
And your deep words to bring into view,
A magical candle, shining bright and true.
It did shine its warm light and cut through the dark,
Going deep inside me, and melting this heart.
And so I stood in wonder, at the new flame of hope you had given.
I was left to stand, enraptured, gazing at your candle.
Wondrously enchnted, how I was left to marvel,
At how different things can seem,
When viewed from just a slightly different angle.















Devious Comments
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Don't shrink your dreams to fit inside the box... Expand the box to fit your dreams.
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I love comments. [link]
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take it as it comes
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"You are a treasure I don't want to lose."
i'm especially fond of your last two lines.
At how different things can seem,
When viewed from just a slightly different angle.
amen
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i too, love the first stanza, its so true and you say it So well
i always thought of friends (like the REAL, TRUE till death friends) as the most important things in life, not family, not lovers, Friends.
it's great that you wrote all your best buds a tribute poem.
how Kind you are to your pack!!
it's Really Great, truely genious!
Goodbye...
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remember im here for u whenever
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